xLucy wrote: Not sure what my best is, so I'll just go with my avatar.
Thanks in advance
Really like it. Love the pose as well as lighting. Technically, few blown, too light becoming distracting, but still, a great shot. Wish tog doing a little dodge/burn to control tone a little bit more. Hate the blurred out legs; just doesn't look natural.
Jocelyn Lu wrote: Not specifically my best, but I'd like some feedback on this one
THANKS.
It showcases your height well, but light's not flattering, leaving spill and face in dark. Kinda like it since it has a purpose but bet will see more from you.
Really like it. Love the pose as well as lighting. Technically, few blown, too light becoming distracting, but still, a great shot. Wish tog doing a little dodge/burn to control tone a little bit more. Hate the blurred out legs; just doesn't look natural.
PhillipPhotography wrote: It showcases your height well, but light's not flattering, leaving spill and face in dark. Kinda like it since it has a purpose but bet will see more from you.
PhillipPhotography wrote: Doesn't work for me. Why such framing? Shy? Leather gloves? Light tones on chest vs face etc... Nothing seems to come together.
Fair enough. Thanks for looking. There's some beautiful shots you have, composition, lighting, frame, subject matter, I love what you have on your page.
Fair enough. Thanks for looking. There's some beautiful shots you have, composition, lighting, frame, subject matter, I love what you have on your page.
Dana Roshnie wrote: Not sure which is my best, either. I think I need to work on being able to have an eye for my own work. Anyway, would love your feedback!
Best is relative and of course, as an art form, go w/ your gut
Saw your port before and this remains my fav. Love the light, color, concept, setting and pose. Wish there's motion through the window but still, as good as it gets
phoebe paul wrote: Can I make you work hard please
Although very small and difficult to judge, this stands out for me. Love the airy light tone and curve. Even at this small size, I can see intensity connection w/ the last one. Again, larger version would allow better viewing.
I really like the lighting, esp the wet ground lighten, increase contrast between subject and background. One thing bothers me is that the face's obscured due to tone merging (clouds & face); would love to see profile. One thing about sunset, esp these last min, is the drama's given. I love the hand poses due to shapes being fully seen, but not quiet what to make of it. Still, like it alot.
Nora Ouamani wrote: I can never pick my best :] how about my avi?
Like the connection you make w/ viewer, but the bare shoulder bothers too much for me. The strap, hair on shoulder make it look like in between shot. Don't like it
Gaita wrote: I'm not really sure if it's my best shot but I'd like to hear your opinion on it.
Kinda like it. The blown out top portion demands too much attention. In fact, I might be seeing the light source there too. I like your pose, esp your arms framing your face nicely. The yellow pant again demands too much attention. Too many things taking attention away from your face, that is not mentioning the bars etc... in background. Still, your pose make it special and I kinda like it.
Don't like the pose (in general I don't like armpit pose) and these sporadic contrast spots, dark bras against skin, tattoo, eye etc... take too much attention away from your lovely curve. Don't like it
The eyes have it. Love the tone and connect w/ viewer. Again, I feel the dark bra demand too much attention, which is arguably fine for such image due to its nature. The hand starts too look odd after while, and it attracts lots of attention due to its light tone. Dodge & burn a bit, and I bet this image shines even more. Love it.
David Hirsh wrote: Most people seem to like this one best in my port - I don't, but I am a bad judge of my strongest work apparently.
It has depth that I like and w/ such foliage, it comes w/ freshness. In fact, the scene sets a mood that makes it a joy to study. Lighting & contrast in tone hightlight her curve well, and I love it.
